My Personal Training website just created...feedback?

My Personal Training website just created...feedback?

yeh still there mate

first time ive really been on here mate since got back so normal service will be resumed shortly

 

My Personal Training website just created...feedback?

My name is Josh Large and my Personal Training packages will help you transform your body, whether it's to lose body fat or gain muscle, whether you just want to look better and feel more confident, or whether you want to get into the shape of a fitness model, my training and nutrition programs will be customised to you to ensure you reach your goals. I will offer advice and support though every step of the journey. If you are committed to making a change I will give you everything else you need to do so.


what if they are coming to you for commitment?

The overall wording on other pages doesnt sound very professional IMO

 

My Personal Training website just created...feedback?

Alot of people moan about there jobs ect, at least your trying to do something about it. These things take time to perfect regardless.

Good on you mate.

 

My Personal Training website just created...feedback?

If i was looking for personal training and came across your website i wouldnt choose you unfortunately.

Its not professional enough and what you offer is vague and would not entice a novice, i presume that is the market you are after as it defo wouldnt attract a more experience person.

 

My Personal Training website just created...feedback?

Not a very good looking website, steep prices and a name that at a glance looks like jizzle which sounds like the little bit of pre cum you have

Not very well thought out i would say.